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What have you done? by emilyk949 What have you done? by emilyk949
Alice from Alice Madness Returns enjoy!
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Critique by DoubtTruth-ToBeALiar Jan 1, 2013, 12:27:33 AM
This, overall, is very good. The clothing is very nicely done. However, the cheek is either shaped unusually, or the hair isn't drawn properly. The hair would be on more of a tilt if someone's head was tilted in the way that hers is. The chin is a bit too far to the right, and the shoulders have too steep of a slope. The shoulder on the left is done fine, but the one on the right looks off. The eyebrows are also slightly misshapen. Eyebrows are difficult on tilted heads, though. I suggest that, if you're drawing a head that is tilted, you should tilt the paper and see if the head would look normal when not tilted, to see if it's done properly or not. Other than these minor things, it looks excellent!
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Samurai-Poet Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry about that. :XD:

It was the first line I thought about when seeing this picture.
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist
haha I understand thank for commenting
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Samurai-Poet Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :iconiamhappyplz:
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Samurai-Poet Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hugo Strange: Look at the first picture. Look at thew dress she's wearing. Look at her hair. It's Alice, isn't it?

Mad Hatter: No, no, no. It can't be Alice. Alice has nice yellow hair and...and isn't covered in blood!
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist
Close enough to me hatter
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Samurai-Poet Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mad Hatter: Really? Do you know Alice~?
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist
Yes but her name is Allie
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Samurai-Poet Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mad Hatter: Allie~? Who's that~?
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist
Allie is my Alice who will protect both worlds
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Samurai-Poet Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mad Hatter: Two worlds? There's only one: Wonderland.
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist
No there is our world and then theres wonderland
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deeyosa Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Cool :D
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist
thank you!
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Gothicmewmew16 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg! I love this .
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist
thank you
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Gothicmewmew16 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome. :D
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CallineXoP Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Creepy and cool! I love your digital arts, they feel really complete and full to me!X)
and I can't do that because a part of mines will feel empty.. :/ X)
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist
Yours are cool
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MurdocNisGod666 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student General Artist
Nice!!!
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist
Thank you
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MurdocNisGod666 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Np.
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Jermmgirl Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Filmographer
looks really creepy-I like it!
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist
THank you~!
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darkshadow278 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Hey Ben we found you a girlfriend.
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist
Uhhhh...???
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darkshadow278 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
If you know the creepypasta haunted majora's mask/ben drowned then you might get the reference.
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emilyk949 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist
Oh I know of Creepypasta but I have't heard of this guy, I'll check him out!
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