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Re did Max's profile WOO.

Name: Maxwell "Max" Jones
Age: (left side) 23
Height: 5'11"
Date of Birth January 9
Race: Human (english descent)
Home Max once lived in a large house on an large island called Lougetown. He spent most of his teens in the streets until he was 15 and traveled with a slave trader unit through the grand line. At 18 he left them starting his own slave trading unit and travels around the grandline islands collecting people.

Status

Occupation: Slave Trader- Captain
Affiliations: The Jones Family, Slave traders (Former)
Epithet: None
Bounty: None
Personal Goals: To kill Comet and save Alexander. Find his Angel to help him.


Devil Fruit Powers:Fog Fog fruit (Lets the user make mirages by forming Fog)
Type Paramecia
Pros: Can make anyone see anything he wants to.
Can hurt people with it
Can hide in the fog.
Cons: Using to much of his powers weakens his mind causing him to make mirages unwillingly make the mirages so only he or anyone in a 20 foot area sees them to.
Depending on how big the illusion is he has to have a base for it ex) For a wooly mammoth to be made he has to use a house or something of its size to make it happen.
If he makes a person illusion he can't control them, they have a mind of there own.
Weapons: Uses a knife (seen on his belt)
Attacks: Fights with a knife most of the time but will fist fight if have to if he is too weak for illusions.

Personality:
At first glance Max is a calm and quiet man, but when angry he vents his anger out in words and ranting on until he is in full rage and takes actions on his words. When he is alone he questions himself asking if he is doing the right things, he feels guilty and confused on the things he has done in his life, his mother usually comes and convics him back to doing what he is doing. He believes that Angels will come and save him one day and his hope relies on that fact. He is also headstrong and stubborn and will plan everything out to make sure things go the way he wants to. Max is also very religious, he believes in god but believes more in his Angels, he believe Angels are the only thing that can save his confused mind because of stories that his mother told him when he was younger.

History:
When Max was a child, his parents wouldn't pay attention to him, living in a big house all alone made Max try hard to get his parents attention. One day his father brought home a young boy with red eyes, he told Max that this is his new Half-Brother Alexander, Max was over joyed that he had someone to play with. Alexander and him got along very well, but his parents had consent fights on his new brother staying her. His mother started to drink heavily, and would lay on a couch or bed and spill nonsense to him for hours about how Alexander was another woman's son with her husband. Then the same month he found a devil fruit in his father's study and ate it, giving him his mirage powers and having people seeing things that weren't there, Alexander help him control his devil fruit powers. After 4 years of his new brother and him have been together Max's mother discovered that his father had cheated on her yet again, she left the house for a few days and returned to say she had kill his mistress and her baby that was still in her womb and then went to kill her husband. Max saw this and thought that in her stage of insanity that she might kill his brother, he ran to Alexander and made him leave the house to save him, but Alexander won't leave without his brother, Max tricked him by saying he would join him as soon as his mother calms down and told him to hide in the docks. Once Alexander was gone, Max's Mother grab her son and left the house, stepping over her dead husbands body on the way. She tried to leave the area but the marines and others stop her and took Max away from her then had he arrest for her crimes, leaving Max to live in an orphanage. Max hated the orphanage, the children would make fun of him and the food never filled his belly, the only thing that keep him going was to see his younger brother again. One day he started to hear his mother's voice in his head and the devil fruit starts to create her image, telling him to do things he didn't want to do. When he turned 18 years old, he got a job helping a man capture people who were in debt and turn them into slaves and help ship them off to Sabaody, his boss was please with his work and how he used his powers to get more slaves that he gave him the knife that he wears today and a bottle of poison. The poison that the boss gave him was not one that kills someone but makes them sick and weak, with the effect that there skin darkens at the spot where it enter the body. At age 16 he finally saw his brother again he was so happy, but he found out his brother has change, not just his name, but the way he acts and talks. His "mother" or the mirage that he create of her, talked to him saying that it wasn't his brother, that it was someone who stole his brothers face. Max believe it, all the anger and madness that was filling up in side of him lass out attack his brother, or his new foe "Comet" to bring his brother back. Comet slash his face and chest leaving claw marks of a bat on him, but he slash Comet's face with poisonen hooks, making then get infected and darking in color. Max swore he will get his remaining family back if it cost him his life.

Fun facts
Theme Song:Mad World- Gary Jules [link]
Color theme: Navy Blue and Black
Element: Wind
Animal theme: Raven
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I can't really critique on the characters story, but I will ad something on the artwork.
Whichever style you choose, the crotch is always halfway up the length of the whole character or higher but never lower.

The other things that need work are the use of shadow and light, the way folds in clothing are drawn, basic anatomy and the balance of the body.
My advice would be to first study basic proportions, following with balance, anatomy, shadow and light and at last clothing.
There are lots of free tutorials on deviantart on these subjects, at least as good as many books that are on the market.

Now for the good points; the mood is transmitted very well and the cravat is pretty well drawn.
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*Shenira Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He may look calm but even so he gaves feeling of dangerous man. Great work with him :)
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~emilyk949 Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist
thank you~ I can't wait until I add him to UE
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*Shenira Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is he going to appear soon?
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~emilyk949 Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Well I have to make arc where they have a mini adventure then there the arc where the coonfess then he comes so soon for the story but its going to take a while
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~CallineXoP Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think..I like him too! :w00t:
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~emilyk949 Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist
Yay~ Glad you do
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~CallineXoP Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yepp :la:
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!the-marimo-pirate Dec 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
His personality! Just wow.

How his mother controls him... It just seems so realistic....
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~emilyk949 Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist
THank you, I've been trying not to make him sound to unrealistic and the way his mother controls him is something that is very key
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=ElectricFerrets Dec 25, 2012  Student General Artist
His hair~ :heart: I love!
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